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Alec: The 1st book sounds really weird but also kind of cool. I feel like I would enjoy reading it because I do like that kind of technology stuff. The 2nd book I would agree with you on it sounds boring. History books in general just seem to be pretty boring and I probably wouldn't read it. Good work on this post though you had everything you needed!

Your first two points are so true! I love dark rainy weather and I just seem to do things best, including reading, in that weather. Also fiction books are really good to read and they way you described it was spot on. I like more dragons or flying things than ghosts because I'm not to much of a scary guy. Great post though it was fun to read!

This is a great poem! You were very descriptive and did a good job describing the fall feel. I also love your last line talking about how the cycle resets I thought that was very clever.

This was very good and fun to read. Your word choice really kept me engaged and it brought good detail and suspense to your writings. My favorite one was the third one you did especially where you said "maybe someday I can sleep again".

The last line is really amazing. I also love when you mentioned her dress gave her inspiration. Also people really do struggle from speech anxiety so to mention how this person got over it is very nice.

Samantha: That really sucks but hey a trip to Florida is always a good time and memories to have for a lifetime. Also I don't like the egg on my biscuit but that's just me.

Those are really good memoirs better then mine haha. It's good to see your having good times in your life with things you love. Also that last picture looks really good with the sunset.

I was right with you on picking a career I had no idea of what I wanted to become. Also being a baker baking cupcakes sounds awesome! I hope you become very successful pursuing your dream career.

This is a very good piece and honestly it really does explain the point of life we all are in. We are about to be set free in less than a year and we will all spread our wings to different places.

You did a very good job putting those lines together to make a short story! It seems like it's not going to well in it but would still be a good book to read in my opinion.